| a poem about redemption from a lover. |


PredestinedPredestined
have you, little beauty, ever tasted salt inside the rain? Let me tell you a story of a miracle Of a redemption from deep pain
I lie in the ashes of a deep undrground A place called, My Fault buried barely alive Laying useless, unfound As i lay dying From my apple of sin my eyes glazed over still were seeking Is there a way to rebegin?
Have you, little beauty, ever tasted salt inside the rain? Let me toll you a story of a miracle Of a redemption from deep pain
The night of shame at betraying my love Didn


Love WarriorLove Warrior
Crimson love-red blooms my eyes As your lips brush mine I kneel before a sword of entwined roses Depths of your eyes knight me As we seal our vow of the amorous guild I am love warrior Enraptured in a promise; a tie unbreakable
Soul wedding in your eyes As your hand becomes encased in mine You hunted to find me, brave contender Moon sweet moon of my forest heart Apparition turned real I christen you love warrior Enraptured in the joys of thousands of worlds
Sunset music in our eyes As we fall into eachother We dance in the star


TracingsTracings
Come like a vine Entwine beneath the outward shell To find my soul Piece within the heart within and make me whole
I laugh with you
I cry with you In your eyes my eyes drip love You trace promises on the heart in me You became a promised part of me And i love with you Tracing you too
Dream like blessed dove Love beneath the outward shell To a deeper ocean of romance Show me the face of a faceless heart Take my hand give me command Let me take a chance
I hold with you I kiss with you In your fingertips
| this is a war poem i started a wopping 9 years ago and then went back and finished recently. enjoy! |
| i started writing when i was nine and have ever since. i draw my inspiration mostly from my emotions and reactions but when im starving for ideas i read the classics to get motivated. some of my favorite poets are emily dickenson, the one and only shakespeare, langston hughes, and henry wordsworth longfellow. |
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